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Mark · Joined: 24 Feb 2007 Posts: 113

This is the first piece I've worked on since I stopped composing and buried myself in some textbooks.

I'm planning for it to be in binary form; I have the A section and the beginnings of a B section.

Does what i have of the B section so far look good? Does what i have of the B section work? Is it developable?

Thanks, Mark.

Score
Midi
Zip with both: http://tinyurl.com/2edqls
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Bitterduck · Site Admin Joined: 22 Feb 2007 Posts: 55

As much as I would love to listen to your piece, i'm banned.

Mark · Joined: 24 Feb 2007 Posts: 113

ah, shit, you mean you can't even get attatchments from YC?

ouch. How did you get banned so quickly?

I'll upload them to yousendit.
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Mark · Joined: 24 Feb 2007 Posts: 113

I've uploaded a zip with the midi and the mus for any of our members banned from YC Laughing

http://tinyurl.com/2edqls
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Jen318tkd · Joined: 24 Feb 2007 Posts: 36 Location: Flagler Beach, Fl

Cool piece Mark Smile

Reminds me of Pachelbel (sp?) Canon a little (a little). It is almost like an etude or exercise. Did you mean for the end to cut off so suddenly, or is that a flaw in the recording?
Good work Smile

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Mark · Joined: 24 Feb 2007 Posts: 113

sounds cut off because i only have the theme of the B section thus far, gonna do the development some time, i just work incredibly slowley.

Thanks for commenting, Mark
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Alex · Joined: 23 Feb 2007 Posts: 20 Location: Oregon

Good job. I like it. Keep it up.

You should really start the next section with different rhythm. The triplets get annoting after a while. Well, post the next part when it's finished. Smile

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Letehn · Joined: 23 Feb 2007 Posts: 42 Location: Canada

*cleans thread*

I had a listen to this and found it quite pleasant- possibly more of a fleshy comment tomorrow (i'll edit this post). Right now I'm worn out. *sigh*

Mark · Joined: 24 Feb 2007 Posts: 113

Thanks Letehn/Anders, I look forward to your comment Laughing

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Bitterduck · Site Admin Joined: 22 Feb 2007 Posts: 55

Damnit, I never had a chance to listen to it. Still have it up?